tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1672638531152489738.post5085471546715626788..comments2023-11-02T12:55:34.717+00:00Comments on Reading, Writing and Everything In Between: Wednesday Blog Hop - Heading HomeHeather Muskhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06401981352369837021noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1672638531152489738.post-7295496620916683162013-04-25T02:04:32.366+01:002013-04-25T02:04:32.366+01:00Wow! This was so good, Heather. I loved how you pu...Wow! This was so good, Heather. I loved how you put me as the reader both in the environment and in the soldier's mind. I felt every step, the heat, the thirst, the sensation of the vitamin, the desire of home, the honor of the mission, all of it. Also, the way you wrote it is very poetic and has the perfect weight of words and cadence... it's intense (in a good way!)<br /><br />Well done! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1672638531152489738.post-10070375600249119952013-04-22T04:47:46.111+01:002013-04-22T04:47:46.111+01:00I LOVED this! My father and 4 of his brothers serv...I LOVED this! My father and 4 of his brothers served together in WWII and I never talked to any of them about what they went through. I can imagine they felt some of these same things. You've created a great arc, showing the pain and the admiration. Well done!Hygge Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07518356793147594574noreply@blogger.com