Many thanks as usual to Carrie, Nicole and Tena for hosting this, you do an amzing job of keeping it all going.
So this weeks picture:
This weeks words: Engineer, muscle, spider, race, machine
And this weeks story:
First New Steps
Eleni's landing was smoother than
normal, not the usual drop and bounce that made this kind of
traveling so uncomfortable. She glanced down at her feet and noticed
the surface she now stood on, glistening and slightly spongy. This
seemed to be the reason for the landing and she made a note to
mention it to engineering,
they could look for this substance in the future. She took her
scanner out to record its composition before moving on.
The
ground beneath her became noticeably firmer as she walked onto the red
and yellow carpet leading away from her landing site. As she walked
she glanced around at the tunnel of green surrounding her. She'd
never seen a place like it, in all her years of traveling. She came
from a race of
nomads, always on the move and never spending more than a few
centuries in a single place.
She
bounced lightly on the spot, flexing her knees and testing her
muscles. The magnetic
pull of the planet seemed to agree with her physiology, she certainly
didn't have any discomfort like she had on the last planet. She spent
days there just trying to shuffle her feet along the ground. Here she
was light of foot and was sure she could've ran if she'd fancied it.
She
walked a little further on, scanning the area as she did so, and her
fascination was drawn to a strange noise coming out of the air above
her. A series of high pitched sounds emanated from somewhere high
above, regular in occurrence and with a second, lower in tone,
almost sounding in response. She mused on the sounds for a while
until she concluded that they could only be some form of
communication. She made a note, certain that life forms were close
by.
Continuing
on, something caught her eye just behind one of the columns ahead. An
odd thing, such that she'd never seen before. A tall creature, very
pale in colour but covered mostly in an odd outer skin. Not very much
in the way of fur and with only two ocular organs that she could make
out. She held up her scanner for a more detailed look, curious as to
what kind of machine
this could be. She held its gaze for a long time before it
turned and bolted.
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Jane
stayed hidden behind the tree as she tried to comprehend what she'd
just witnessed. She'd been heading down to the river for some water
samples when she'd heard the low hum and seen the beam of light. It
disappeared and in its place was an odd creature, human sized but
spider-like with its
four legs and wiry arms.
She
watched in awe as it studied its surroundings, and almost forgot her
footing as it looked right at her. She held its stare for an
eternity, before turning as quickly as she could and ran. There was
no way the lab guys were going to believe this.
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Oh, very interesting. I like how you took a look at humans from the alien perspective first, and from one that doesn't know about us.
ReplyDeleteThanks. It was tricky trying to get into the mindset of someone that doesn't know anything of our planet, describing things rather than saying what they are.
DeleteVery cool! I like the bit at the end. That's a gorgeous photo too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Christine. This one definitely just came to me as I was going along. I love it when that happens!
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