The Wednesday Blog Hop is a great hop that happens each week and it has two criteria for taking part. One is a picture prompt and the other is five random words that have to be included in a short story of no more than 500 words.
Once you have your story go to one of the hosts, Carrie Sorensen, Nicole Pyles, Tena Carr and Leanne Sype, and link up before reading the other contributions.
The picture this week is:
and the five words are: aerial, far, rain, sale, profit.
This week was quite tricky getting the words to fit, plus I think I'm coming down with the dreaded bug that has been doing the rounds, so I'm not sure how much sense this weeks offering is going to be.
Anyway, here goes ...
The Kindness in Youth
Sam leant against the window with his
nose pressed up against the glass. Even from the outside he was sure
he could smell the sweet goodness from everything on display. He held
his shiny coin in his hand, it was aching from where he'd been
clutching it so tightly. His mother had given him her last bit of
cash in her purse and told him to get himself something nice. He'd
run the whole way in excitement but had been worried about dropping
the money on the way. He opened his hand stiffly and looked again at
the coin. There was so much variety for sale
he couldn't make his mind up.
The
last time he'd seen such a lovely selection had been at the school
fare, his eyes had
been so wide it made his mother laugh. He'd been disappointed though,
a huge storm hit and there was so much rain
it had to be abandoned. He'd gone home empty handed, saddened at what
he'd missed.
He'd not thought
much of it until today. His mother didn't bake much and she'd always
insisted they all ate healthily to grow up strong. She was a kind
woman but very strict with the sweets and cake.
He'd been so
surprised when she sent him to the bakery he'd almost thought he was
dreaming. All he'd done is repair her tv aerial for her so she
could watch her favourite programme during the day. He'd done it more
to get her out of his hair than to help her out. Without it she was
hovering around the whole time, trying to help with his school
projects. It was easier for him to fix it so he could get his time
back for himself. He never realised there would be any extra profit
in it.
And now he was
deciding what to get with his unexpected gift. He was poised on the
verge of opening the door when he noticed an elderly man slumped
against the side of the shop next door. His clothes were ragged and
his shoes worn through, a hat pulled dow over his greasy hair. Sam
looked at the cakes again, longingly, and then back to the man.
Sighin deeply he took his hand off the door handle and handed the
money to the man. 'Here you go, sir,' he said, 'get yourself
something to eat.' The old man looked up into Sam's eyes, filled with
gratitude. He took the money and shuffled down the street to the
coffee shop.
Sam resumed his
position at the window and gazed in. He didn't notice the jangle of
the bell as the door opener, and the owner stood next to him in his
bright blue apron.
'That was a lovely
thing you just did, son' he said, holding out a brown paper bag. 'Why
don't you enjoy this little treat for your kindness.' Sam felt the
smile spread across his face.
Word count: 495
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Heather! I love your story! It's sweet and endearing. Aerial came to be easily--my tough word was profit. Well done!
ReplyDeleteYou did a beautiful job on this Heather. I especially liked the ending and how Sam decides to give his coin to the old man so he can get something to eat.
ReplyDeleteI had a hard time with Aerial as well.
What a great day of lessons for Sam. :) This was a very heartwarming story. Thank you.
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